For reading my group has been reading a novel called 'rat island' witten by Stu Duval. Task one was to do a google drawing which showed the character, problem and scene.
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Kia ora. I am Verity from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you showed so clearly what was going on.
Did you think about filling up the wine cup
Next time making the background stand out a bit more
Please visit my blog
here
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